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Melerald throws Super Quartz into the Bay and Melerald lands on-top of her chest and then Melerald pulls her up and starts punching her in the face and throws her in into the first half of the bridge and the entire thing collapses and then Super Quartz stands up and grabs a piece of the bridge and starts hitting Melerald in the face with it, but then Melerald slices apart with her head laser beam and then Super Quartz kicks Melerald and she falls down and then Super Quartz grabs Melerald’s face and smashes it into the mountain and smashed her face into the rocky mountain ten times until Melerald falls down and then Super Quartz steps back and places her left hand on her right arm and turns her right hand sideways and shoots a laser beam out of it, slicing Melerald’s left arm off. Melerald screams in pain and then Super Quartz kicks her again, about five times, but Melerald grows her arm back and then punches Super Quartz in the crotch and Super Quartz falls down, holding her crotch in pain. Then Melerald grabs Super Quartz’s neck with one of her tentacles along with her torso and pulled her towards her. Then Melerald’s right hand turned purple and she stuck her hand into Super Quartz’s chest.

Meanwhile, Amethyst is trying to climb up the side of the crater to get the Light Cannon, but the Light Cannon fell into the crater along with another piece of land and Amethyst grabbed it and frantically ran back to the Nomad. Garnet put her hand on the ground and her feet on the ground and slowly stood up despite the gravity beam putting extreme force on her body. “GARNET! I have the Light Cannon!” shouted Amethyst. Meanwhile, inside of the Drifter, (Dark) Sapphire spotted the Ark ship through the giant window and smirked. Back in Beach City, Amethyst enters the gravity field and runs very, very, very, slowly to Garnet and eventually, she reached Garnet. “Alright, let’s activate this thing” said Garnet and both Garnet and Amethyst said “IF EVERY PORK CHOP WERE PERFECT, WE WON’T HAVE HOT DOGS!” super fast and then the Light Cannon started opening up, when the gravity beam pushed it down. Garnet and Amethyst grabbed the Cannon and held it up towards the bottom of the machine, Garnet and Amethyst’s faces are being squashed by the gravity and Garnet’s sunglasses were started to crack. Then the cannon fired and shot up towards the top of the beam, and the tip of the beam formed into the body shape of Rose and then Garnet’s sunglasses cracked even more, and the cracks were getting bigger and bigger and Garnet yelled really loud and her then the Light Cannon beam reached the top of the beam and the inside of the Nomad exploded and Garnet and Amethyst were pushed down to the ground and Garnet’s sunglasses broke and the gravity beam shut off both on the Nomad and the Drifter.  The water tendrils collapsed and fell back into the ocean and the debris that formed into a ring around the head of the Drifter fell down to the ground and all that remained was a large crater with a few destroyed and burning buildings around the rim of it, but Drifter continued to hover over the crater. But the Nomad on the other hand collapsed to the ground, its third leg broke off and the whole machine caught a flame and fell to the ground. The Dark Aeon was reacting badly and release a huge amount of energy that caused the machine to be destroyed in a massive fiery explosion. “They did it” said Salt. The Skull clouds began to recede and all went into Melerald and the night sky cleared up, “What? NO!!!!” shouted Melerald, then Super Quartz broke free and punched Melerald in the face about four times and shot her with her chest beam and Melerald was knocked out, unconscious. Super Quartz grabbed her by her neck and lifted her up into the air and began flying to New York with Melerald in her clutches.
Here, Garnet and Amethyst take down the Nomad machine. We are reaching closer and closer to the end of this story 
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SpaceWonder368 Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Horray for Super Quartz!

Awestruck chapter, love it so much.
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JeditheSciFiFreak Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You mean hooray for Garnet and Amethyst, they're the ones who shut the gravity beam 
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SpaceWonder368 Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ooops.

I mean horray for Garnet and Amethyst!
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JeditheSciFiFreak Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Also if you've noticed, Garnet's sunglasses were cracking and breaking apart, which we'll get to see Garnet without her glasses and see her eyes for the first time 
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SpaceWonder368 Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh god.

I can't wait for that, that's going to be awesome!
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JeditheSciFiFreak Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And I'll even draw it 
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SpaceWonder368 Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome!
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JeditheSciFiFreak Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sure what they should look like though 
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Bry-guy Jan 22, 2014  Student Photographer
Totally crazy stuff :D (Big Grin) 
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JeditheSciFiFreak Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What did you think the part at the end where Garnet and Amethyst succeed in destroying the Nomad and shutting down the gravity beams on both it and the Drifter? 
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